Mae's hair is a bit messy rather than looking layered and Kaoru looks like one of the Beetles. >.> XD
Kaoru's hair is challenging for some reason. I envy your ability to draw it so well, *MaeMusicMelody
But, of course, if you see anything so far you need fixed (or have tips on how to fix something), just point it out.
Mae belongs to *MaeMusicMelody
Kaoru Hitachiin belongs to whoever owns Ouran High School Host Club